Chocolate

[teleen_fiction]

Title: Chocolate
Author: Teleen (teleen_fiction)
Fandom: Torchwood
Pairing: Jack/Ianto
Spoilers: None
Size: 100 words exactly - my first official drabble, :).
Rating: Teen
Summary: Ianto enjoys Jack. 
Author's Note: Written, finally, for eve_from_oz  for her help in shaving off time in the posting of "The Perfect Storm".  Thanks again!

 

“I have to admit, I was skeptical, but this isn’t bad,” Ianto said, licking carefully.

“I told you you’d like it,” Jack told him, his breath catching as Ianto did something particularly skillful with his tongue.

“I really should listen to you more.  But then, you should listen to me.”

“I would if you ever said anything!”

“Now, sir.  Surely you aren’t protesting how I’m using my mouth right now?” Ianto asked, eyebrow raised.

“No, no protests here, none, I promise.”

Ianto began to grin in a way that was guaranteed to make even the most stoic Captain nervous.

“Good.”

 

Comments

[ravenja1170.livejournal.com]

cute and hot ;-) And you leave so much for our imagination, beautiful! :-)

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

*blushes* Thank you! :)

[eve-from-oz.livejournal.com]

I am so in awe of your ability to say so much with so few words, well done and thank you!

And you're most welcome for the posting tip :)

I would have commented sooner but I somehow managed to miss this (and chapter 52 of TPS) until I saw the Teaspoon alerts on my email.

Clearly I have failed in my journal stalking duties lol ^^

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

Bad stalker - no biscuit! ;)

I'm really glad that you enjoyed it, :).

Thanks for reading & for the lovely compliments, :).

[bk_forever]

Hmmm, chocolate coated Jack?

Wonder if Ianto was skeptical about the type of chocolate being used rather than what Jack suggested using it for...

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

My thought is that Ianto wouldn't have liked the mess, but the great thing about these sorts of ficlets is that they're sooo open to the imagination of the readers, :).

Thanks for reading!

even the most stoic Captain nervous

[witchway.livejournal.com]

hehehehehehe

lucky, lucky Jack.

Re: even the most stoic Captain nervous

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

:) He is very lucky indeed! ;)

Thanks for reading! :)