Support Stacie Drabble - Longing

[teleen_fiction]

Title: Longing
Author: Teleen (teleen_flction)
Pairing: Jack/Nine/Rose
Rating: PG
Summary: Watching them together was always bittersweet.
A/N: Written for Wendymr, for bidding over $10 on me - thanks!
Her prompt was Nine/Jack/Rose - Longing

ETA - Edited for clarity.  My apologies to Wendymr - maybe it's nervousness, since I'm such a fan of hers, but I just can't seem to get this right!  :)

 

Watching them together was always bittersweet.  Their easiness with one another, the way they spoke and joked and teased…  It was enough to fill one with an emotion that could almost be described as… longing.

They were laughing now, the easy laugh of comfortable friends, and the desire to be a part of that was overwhelming for a moment.

They looked up from their position under the TARDIS console.

“What is it, Rose?” The Doctor was his usual gruffly concerned self.

“Nothing.  Just… watching you together.”

“Like what you see?” Jack’s tone was suggestive and not wholly serious. 

She nodded anyway, almost against her will.

They beckoned invitingly.   She moved to the comfort of their arms.

 

Comments

[juliet316]

Very nice.

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

Thanks!

[iceshade.livejournal.com]

Your Jack seems to be perpetually in need of hugs. ::smishes him:: it's adorable. <3

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

Darn. Looks like I Failed! on this fic. It's supposed to be Rose who's doing the 'longing,' not Jack. But it was exactly 100 words like this... Screw it. (*goes to edit*)

[iceshade.livejournal.com]

Okay, you did edit. so I didn't totally misread the entire thing (because I've done stuff like that) because your response made my go OH SH--.

AND YOU DID NOT FAIL.

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

Heh. I sorta failed, but I appreciate the support. :)

[frakkin-addict.livejournal.com]

Very nice. I love that it's Jack and the Doctor being watched by Rose. And Jack's "Like what you see?" is so Jack. Thanks for writing. :)

[teleens-journal.livejournal.com]

Thanks for reading! :)